Sunday, 8 May 2016

The Tree Climbing Adventure


The chocolate bark tumbles down and is trampled by feet. Evergreen pine needles prick me as I climb the tree.
The singing birds chirp there way up the tree.

The sky's teardrops runs down the back of my freezing cold neck.

The ‘Spider-Man’ helmet stays firm on my precious head.

My activity group friends blurt out helpful words.


3 comments:

  1. I love the way the words in your first sentence fit together so well.

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  2. you used really good words for the different colers you mentioned such as "The chocolate bark tumbles down and is trampled by feet."
    i love that sentence it makes me feel like i was in that same moment in the storie with you

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  3. This pice of writing is amazing and I loved how you used describing words great job

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